I caught myself having written the following in an email:
…which would add value to X…
How about “improve”, self?
I try to watch out for the creep of jargon and lazy language, but if you read my other posts you’ll notice that my writing is not superb.
I assume that several months or years down the road I’ll weave this gristle into something better; until then you’ll be treated to literary jewels like:
After all, given that there exist MSc’s, MFE’s, and CFQ’s, the fabulous RenTec profits must have already evaporated while I was still in diapers and now I’m just reading the millionth copy of Liar’s Poker at the bottom of the pyramid scheme.
Given that there exist? I might as well apply for the Obfuscation Prize right now.